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(Contains: violence/gore and strong language)
It was like every other Friday, but you felt a bit off today as like something was going to happen, something bad. by the end of the day you were waiting for your bus but you really had to go to the bathroom. Running down the hall and turning around the corner to the close bathroom but instead bumping into someones back who happen to be Matthieu. he turn his head glared at you, you said a quite 'Sorry' and ran around him but stop to see your friend Alex getting bullied again,she just stared at the ground with no emotion until one girl with blond hair took her bag and grab book from in side that kind of looked like a dairy, but soon as the girl took it out Alex ran at her but to trap over her own feet and land on her face. Everyone around her started laughing at her and the girl with the blond hair open the book and went to a random page.

"What the hell is this?"

Alex's face had a hint of red from anger and embarrassment. "Give it back."

"Huh?" The girl held her hand next to her ear.

"Give my fucking book back!"

You made your way be hide the girl with blond hair and took the book and grabbed Alex's beg to. You give her a cold look and walked up to Alex helping her off the ground and handing her bag and the book to her. You both walked away down the hall, Alex kept her eyes locked on the ground grinding her teeth together.

"You all right?" You asked.

Alex snapped out of her thought's and looked up at you "I'm fine, but... I'm a bit hungry."

You did a little laugh "Wait I got something in my beg you can eat."

You both stopped and you opened your bag, after a minute digging around in your bag you found a chocolate bar you were saving for a little later but when Alex was hungry she won't stop asking for something to eat or stop talking about food. You held Alex the chocolate bar.

"Thanks"

"No problem"

You both started walking down another hall until you remember the bus and bathroom but you didn't really have to go as bad now, but the bus was your only ride home.

"Dude my bus!"

"Oh shit!"

Both you started running down to the bus stop to only see your bus leave.

"Nooooooo!" You yelled slowly going down to your knee's out of breath.

"Don't, don't worry man I can-" Alex had to take breaths as well "I can call mom and ask for a rid." She finished but still panting.

"Dude we're so out of shape." You laughed out

"I know" Alex laughed along.

After Alex called her mom saying how you both missed your bus and you guys were in need of a ride, her mom said as simple no. making you both a bit irritated that you had to walk home. Looking up seeing how it was going to get dark in a hour or two you kind of want to go to the mall not to far, if you take a short cut or two.

"Want go to the mall?"

"Not really, I'm hungry for some sweet's though~"

Sighing and looking at her a bit annoyed. "You always hungry for sweets."

"True but I don't really want to go to the mall..... the bitch is there." she was looking up into the sky.

Sighing yet again "Fine where you want to go?"

Alex looked back at you with a bit of grin "Have you heard of the store that just open down the street from here?"

'Oh god' you thought to your self. it was store with 'lots' of little sweets and you knew well that Alex is going to some how make you buy her 'lots' of little sweets. "Yeah..."

"Can we go, Please~!" She had her little puppy eyes on trying to stare you down.

"Why not."

"Yeah~!" She throw her hands in the air and gave you a big hug and grabbed her bag and started walking a head.

"Hey wait up." You called Running to her side, she giggled.

By the time you two got to the store Alex stopped as if she saw a ghost she throw her hood on and turned around and looked at you.

"We should leave"

"Why?"

"Cause- "

The door open and stepping out was the girl with blond hair from earlier who had a name of curse, her name was Samantha but Alex and you remembered her as 'the bitch'.

"Oh nice seeing you here."

Alex turned around and just looked at her.

The Samantha walked past both of you than spoke again "You should be careful of what you grab to school in cluing that creepy book." and took her leave

You never looked into that book Alex didn't let anyone look in it, she brought it to school only to finely show you what was in it but she changed her mind though. You grab Alex's hand and dragging her in the store, once in the store you pushed her to the 'candy area'

"Go ahead buy all the candy as you can, I'll pay for it."

Alex looked at you surprised but very happy. "Okay~!" Running to the candy like it was the last day on earth.

~Le skip when leaving the store.~

Looking back up to the sky it was already a bit dark, wired it never got this late so fast.  You better get home and prove that 'bad' feeling wrong. You looked back down at your friend Alex.

"Well I guess I'll be heading back home."

"Ah, okay thanks for buying me the candy~" Alex giggled.

"No problem."

You both said good bye and went your different ways home. As you were walking you started thinking what your mom will say when you get back home, oh man she going to be piss for not calling her. You looked up a head seeing ally that made you have chills and made that 'bad' feeling come back but it felt a bit worst. As you came closer you decide to maybe run past it, yep that was your best Ideal you could think at the moment.

As you were about to run past, someone pulled you in. all most trapping over your feet you kept you bellies and try to push the man off but you were to weak to. He brought a knife near your throat.

"Stop fighting" he yelled

You started to panic and ignored him and continue to fight back, you tryed grabbing the knife that was near your throat but failed so you yelled. He forced you to the ground make you more scared. You both thought you both heard someone at the other end of the ally but no one was there, you decide to grab the knife as you can as you took hold of the knife and ended up cutting the prime of your hand. You bite your tongue from screaming in pain or any  sign of pain. You pulled it out of his hand and kicked him in between the legs or so you thought since he was yelling in pain. You got on your feet walking back a bit trying to think what was happening. He looked at you in the eyes and spoke.

"You little bitch, your pay for that!"

He ran at you making you snap from your thought, you held the knife in front of you making him run into it. The knife went into his chest, he fell to his knees holding his chest. You  looked down at your hands to see his blood on your hands and the knife, your eyes widen in fear but with a bit of excitement. Looking down at the man at your feet you brought the knife above your head and swung it down. You stabbed him next to his throat making blood skirt up at you, You stabbed him seven more time than looking at his body all bloody and stabbed up, than looking at your self blood covered you up and down. You started to shack and took two or three steps back.

"what have I done?" you whispered to your self.

"Oh god, what have I done?!" You said a bit loader. You open your bag and took off the sweater you had on and putting it in our beg. Looking at the 'murder weapon' you had to do something with it, if you leave it here your get caught for sure maybe you can get read of it on your way home or something. Grabbing your beg, you ran out of the ally and ran all the way home also throwing the knife in a bush on your way.

Not knowing two people were standing not to far and saw the hole thing may cause you trouble but no they weren't going to tell the police the police were one of they're enemies , no their already had plan's for you and this was going to make it even more fun.


>:]
Ah I love this~! I'm sorry if it's um.... a bit sucky this was my first time writing some gore and yeah. xD
I'm try my best on working on part 2 I got exams coming up and I got to study and yeah. c:

Part 1: Your here~!
Part 2: [link]
Part 3: Coming Soon!!!
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japanxcanadaforever Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
So, I finally killed someone, eh? Well, i knew my insane side would show someday. I may be already crazy, but not insane. I was wondering when I would snap and stab someone...
Great story though,
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Bakugami-Amaterasu17 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The bad part is my name IS Samantha and at school I was known as South Italy in my circle of friends bc I was a bitch. Haha.
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munchkingetya Featured By Owner May 26, 2013
I am scared now, whats gonna happen???!!
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darkvampgal2321 Featured By Owner May 12, 2013
this is such a great fanfic. i cant wait for the next chapter
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caitlinzoe Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I can't wait until part 2! Keep going!
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mme2100 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Mooooore! Pretty please?
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Bashiix12 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Student General Artist
Wait... I have a friend named Alex.. She's a girl... We both call each other man and dude... We both make fun of our weight... IT'S LIKE THIS STORY WAS MADE FOR ME OxO xDD
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BadTouchTrioMiyazaki Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Or I could just calmly explain to the police that he attacked me first, but noooooo...I have to flippin' run. xD just kiddin', this is pretty good, Dude~
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mme2100 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah but you could never explain the over kill...
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BadTouchTrioMiyazaki Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Uh...Temporary Insanity! It holds up in any court!
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mme2100 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yush!
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BadTouchTrioMiyazaki Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The legal short-cut coupled with the "he started it" excuse~ X3
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mme2100 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Just found a loop hole for every murder as long as they arn't serial. Nice :iconplottingplz:
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BadTouchTrioMiyazaki Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
...Aw, crap -.- Have I helped a murderer by accident again?
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mme2100 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hope not, unless a serial killer hangs out on deviantart and reads through old comments. Oh jesus i really hope no one does that! :iconscaredplz:
Btw i luv ur user name!
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TheHero987 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This was great! ^^ hope you make part 2 soon!
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CeianaLuvsCookies Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013
Please update ? ;-;
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WhatRemainss Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013
ah yes I will be updating but I have a very bad cold, but I'll do my best at updating as soon as I can. >.<
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Idontknow506 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013
plz more!
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DJ-Sky-Storm-117 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
>;) Cant wait for more!
And maybe as a further opinion, there should be a *cough*lemon*cough*....Sorry, got some citrus stuck in my throat.
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WhatRemainss Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
Lol I was thinking of making it into a *Cough* lemon *cough* but... I never wrote one before and I'll be really awkward when writing it. xD
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DJ-Sky-Storm-117 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahem. I can educate you in the ways of one, and there are a few helpful tip/journals on here that can point you in the right direction. :D I love :iconlemonplz:
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LuLu-Chain Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013
XD OMG YES~!
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doublerainbow-girl Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
did you intentionally type the word beg instead of bag every time? sorry i just noticed that and so yeah but it was still really good ^^
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WhatRemainss Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
Yeah, I was writing this at night and my glasses are broken so I didn't notice but I'm getting new glasses soon so hopefully I won't make the same mistake lol and Thank you~! c:
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doublerainbow-girl Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ha i can see that and np ^^
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Italy-PastaLove Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
sorry i half to point this about ^^; its spelled bag not beg and the one part where it says ""Ah, okay thanks for buy me the candy~" Alex giggled." its buying just add the "ing"
i wasn't trying to be mean....
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WhatRemainss Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
It's okay thanks for telling me, I was writing this at night to so I thought I would miss spell something. xD
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Italy-PastaLove Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ah! xD
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WhatRemainss Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
x3
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mermaidfan Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student General Artist
Moar please I want to read sexy senses
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littlelepracaun Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
MOAR!!!
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Arty022618 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student Artist
Awesome~
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AnimeStar194 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
More. Now. It's very good!
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kasukabe12 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
neat
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